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November 1, 2012

Just hate me...

It's not me I' m worried about.
Not my heart, but it's you.
I live with pain, I snuff it out.
But for you, it is too new.

We live far apart,far too much-
I can't bask in your scent;
The distances are vast as such,
All we can do is resent.


Can't drown my face in your hair,
Can't kiss or cradle your chin;
Can't blow you kisses in the air.
Can't stroke your lips as you grin.

But far more important, far more
Is that I make others suffer.
Hearts which loved me, they tore.
They couldn't be any tougher.

To want me is to die and cry,
Shallow hopes wind up in flames.
The river of tears won't dry,
When your soul this craving claims.

So shun me,stay away from me,
I'm not worth the anguish, worth the ache.
Hate me, loathe me, run away, just flee.
Lest your heart gets seared by a stake.

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24 comments:

  1. Back to poetry eh?? Nice comeback :)

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    1. @Swarnali Thanks!!Back to my roots,as they say!

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  2. Oh, this is sorta heartbreak kinda poetry but I totally loved this one, you have a way with emotions!

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    1. @Rima And you have a way with compliments!! ;-)

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  3. i dontno what to say. it felt like twas written for me.

    Gosh.
    Its fabulous.

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  4. Wow! I am very new to blogging and yours is one of the first blogs my blog-hopping brought me to.And I can't thank my stars enough for finding this. I've been through several of your posts.You sure have a way with words, dude! Brilliant!

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    1. Words love me!! ;-) They are practically falling over themselves vying for my attention!!:-P And thanks!

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    2. Nopes. A simple fact. Irrefutable axiom!;-)

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    3. Well,well..don't let it get to your head!! :-)

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    4. The damage..milady..has been done and can't be undone!! ;-) You only got your heady compliments to blame..

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  5. "Missing you gets easier everyday because even though I am one day further from the last time I saw you, I am one day closer to the next time I will see you" --how about a poetry along these lines. Patience pays my friend. Don't be so morbid about the distance..even though your morbidity is portrayed in fine written poetry!

    +To Me It Matters+

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    1. @Aprad It's not what you think..:-) Not at all..but thanks a lot...the comment is much appreciated..

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  6. pain is dripping from every word of your poem, Rahul.. it's so beautifully emoted..
    Loved the second last stanza very much.
    May the true love conquer all the obstacles and emerge victorious! god bless!

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    1. @Puji :-) Ahh well I try..thank you for appreciating it so much..:-)

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  7. aah,,,u nailed it.completely...
    very well written..loved it ..:)

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    1. :-) Thanks..btw..dont see you online much..what gives? :-)

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  8. Nice poem...but sometimes, just let the words flow. It doesn't always have to rhyme :) It doesn't always have to follow the abab pattern, you know! ^_^

    Keep up the good work :)

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