He buried her teary face in his silent comforting chest. He wanted to tell his best friend so badly he loved her. But he couldn’t break her trust. Her boyfriend had broken that already. She never understood what he felt for her, he rued. Suddenly he felt her lips on his. Something new had begun.
P.S.Ok PeeVee this one is for you. :-) 55 fiction crossed off the list.
Oh Nice... Beginning on love...
ReplyDeletePen down some more, you are good at it:)
this is so beautiful..
ReplyDeleteOh my, thank you:)
ReplyDeleteIt's pretty good. Try your hand at genres other than romance.. like suspense or crime..
ohhooooooo...story of my life!! :D
ReplyDelete@saru was it really any good? :-(
ReplyDelete@PV :-( is it really good?I think it is crap..
@Red What?????How????
@anonymous really?
Kya baat! Too good for a first attempt.
ReplyDeleteI was Probably feeling A little low when I read it first time.. On second thoughts, I feel this kinda thing seems perfect for some thriller suspense!!
ReplyDeleteThis is good stuff :D
ReplyDeletei mean seriously good, says so much though :)
Good Work You! :) :) :)